Sunday, September 14, 2008

The Letter!!


In the dark clouds, when baffled you were,
In the dreamy nights, when lost you were,
When things were upside down, life for you wasn’t too sound,
As a friend I was there, doing all that I could,
A pillar of strength & support of trust,
Never thought what you’ll give me in return… Little love & affection, I spared just for you,
Now that you are fine, & life’s bright again,
It seems to me, I mean nothing to you,
New people, new beginnings, you seem so occupied,
I sit & wonder, were we ever tied,
The friendship that we shared is lost somewhere,
Gone are the days of sharing secrets & dreams,
No place in your happy world, I have, it seems…

There, throughout, reconstructing,
Putting pieces of your messed up world together,
Every moment, trying to make you feel better,
But today, standing all alone, on this bright sunny day,
Beneath the shadows of neglect & hurt,
All from a pal, I considered the best…

It’s mean & unfair, but this is all, I have got in my share…
Closing this letter, to you, my friend,
Wherever you are, I just have to say,
I was, I am, and I’ll always be there,
I hope someday you’ll care…

7 comments:

Unknown said...

beutiful didi...simply amazing:)

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Unknown said...

Well written...very nice!!

Namita Kohli said...

thanks pals :-)

shaunak said...

your poetic style is commendable..simple and penetrates the heart...

Namita Kohli said...

thanks for your appreciation..

amit said...

i dont know whether this comes from a personal experience or creative flight of imagination but it is what we can see around us in this swarm of humanity which once used to be big-but-caring place but today it is becoming small but incidently harsh